Sunday, March 23, 2014

Greatest Love of All



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Is it rains
Or is it sun
No I think it lies
In the yellow pages of that book
But that book I can still do without
But not without my pen and ink
Ink is nothing but my thoughts aloud
I love them more than all above
Thoughts are but a part of me
But why just the part, I love the whole
What lies within and spreads beyond 
The soul inside and mould outside
My heart that feels
And knows to love
That makes me worthy to be loved
My heart my soul
My greatest love of all




A lot has been happening in the last week in our side of the world. With some lovely theme reveals happening in the blogfest co-hosted by Vidya Sury , and the AtoZ group on facebook anchored and enthused by Gyani Corinne. The UBC challenge is also rearing to go in April. But among all these things, our first love, Write Tribe can just not take a back seat, and so the 100 words on Saturday is on (just wid a tad bit delay). This weeks prompt was - "the greatest love of all"




27 comments:

  1. My heart, my soul...my greatest love of all... that clinches it ! Kudos over this piece, Apoorva ji :) Well written :)

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  2. Lovely take on the prompt Apoorva :)

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  3. Apoorva, this is a sensational poem :) Loved it.

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  4. That's a lovely expression... the last two lines are kind of reverberating in my head! :)

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    1. sometimes you just hit the jackpot unknowingly .. I think I did it with this one

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  5. Such a lovely poem :) My heart my soul, My greatest love of all! Love these lines especially :)

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  6. And the greatest love of all is to love, holistically!

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    1. Right you are michelle ....If you love it has to be whole

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  7. My heart, my soul... I can read this over and over again. Beautiful :)

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    1. Thats is such a fulfilling compliment ... Thank you so much Shailja

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  8. Nicee!!
    Our souls hide such depths that they are unfathomable. But yes, they can be loved with their dark depths and lighted crevices as well.

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    1. Loved the way you put it.. a poem for a poem's reply

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  9. What a beautiful poem... I had to re-read it -- I loved the "ink is nothing but my thought aloud" - so true - it got stuck with me:-)Thanks:-)

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    1. I am so glad you liked it Eli. Some words just resonate with our thoughts so much that they just stick with us. So happy few of my words this this for you :D

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  10. That was beautiful... made me smile :)

    All the best for A to Z! :D

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    1. All the best to you tooo.... Anything for a smile on someone's face :D

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  11. Wow this is amazing...kinda rung in my mind now :) Beautiful Apoorva

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    2. Thank you my dear lady!!!

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  12. My heart, my soul..This is so beautiful, Shiva:)
    http://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2014/03/24/100-words-on-saturday-the-greatest-love-of-all

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  13. I think the last few words said it all...my heart, my soul the greatest love of all! Beautiful!

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  14. Beautiful words Apoorva...love your take on the prompt. Very lyrical...

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  15. i loved this poem... loving one's soul, and heart...loving oneself itself is the best....

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