The tribe whisper is on.. An idea started by Ayush .. To know more read here : Write Tribe - Whispering a secret
This is part 6 of the story series. You could read the beginnings here ..... Part1 at Akhils, Part2 at Pins, Part3 by Laxmi, Part4 by Leo ,Part 5 by Meena, Part 6 by Kalpana
Aiyana – the name
created ripples in his heart!
Jamal could not take his eyes off her. There was
an untold mystery in those eyes behind the veil, which revealed a lot and yet
held unfathomable hidden secrets deep inside. She wore a black bridal gown.
Black, the colour of mourning, for a wedding?? Jamal found that intriguing. He
made a note to go back to the finer prints of the manuscript for a possible
ritual or explanation.
He was about to keep the
photograph in his pocket when, all of sudden, his eyes fell on the symbol at
the backside… it was a basket with a handle, but what was more disturbing was
that cross on that symbol, which was made in blood. He remembered seeing a
similar symbol embossed in blue on the scimitar as well.
The case was becoming a maze, so many
possibilities, and yet no clue on which line to tread which will lead to the
ultimate truth… But then a thought crossed his mind… is there anything called
truth... how does truth look in its real form… There is always your truth, my
truth, his truth and their truth. The eyes that sees it, or the heart that
feels it or the soul that suffers…each have their own truth, their own story.
Jamal jolted himself out of this philosophical
train of thoughts… he was the “Logical” “Analytical” detective… and not a
“Thoughtful” “imaginative” “Free” author… his trade did not permit him to dwell
in ambiguity…he had to take this case to a logical conclusion, decide the
rights and wrongs… The victims and culprits… in black and white…there was no
scope for greys.
Scimitar – Roul – Aiyana – Triton – Kara – Kruson -
Half eaten plates – Lipstick Marks – “I saw him” – the Housekeeper , the
only breathing soul near Qashif…So many clues yet no answer. And then his
intuitive-self took him back to the line in Shastri’s file which he had
casually read but did not pay attention:
Triton
and his clan along with their faithful servants disguise as merchants to allay
suspicion and survive....................
The Housekeeper, the first witness of the death,
the soul companion to Qashif…how could whole of his team overlook such an
important linking pin. Jamal just knew that the housekeeper was hiding facts,
misleading the detective team and most importantly protecting "someone".
For whom was he faithful ..was he merely a servant or more than that..
had he betrayed his master or kept his promise.
Perplexed and lost in thoughts Jamal was about
to leave the library when all of a sudden a hand caught him from the back. His
heart skipped many a beats and startled he looked back to find Shastri in the
room.
" I did a deeper research about the ancient Egyptian
hieroglyphs embossed on the scimitar, and it seems, this is not an ordinary
scimitar. This is the khenemet Scimitar" Shastri blurted out in
excitement
“And that means???” an irritated Jamal asked
“Khenmet, literally means the one that joins.
This sword in the olden days was presented by the bride to her beloved on the
wedding day, and whoever, she chose to be her partner, the initial of his name
got permanently embossed on this scimitar.” Shastri was elated to have done his job well.
“But I did not see any initial on the sword” Jamal could not hold his nerves now. He badly
wanted an answer.
“There was… hieroglyphic script uses symbols .. A basket
with handle, represents the letter K. This scimitar belonged to Kruson was
presented to him by his lady love on the day of their wedding.
Jamal took out the photograph from his pocket
and looked at it again…
It was time to meet the Housekeeper now…
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Loved this... and the connection made using Khenemet... you've done your research well... kudos! :)
ReplyDelete-Vaisakh
Thanks Vaisakh... Loving the story...lets see where it goes
DeleteLoved the khenemet connection. The symbol on the reverse side of the photograph , the black bridal dress and the Egyptian writing on th scimitar are good ingredients to suspense.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kalpana... hope that i did not disappoint your imagination and did justice to your thoughts :)
DeleteShiva, beautifully well researched.. yoy people, get this published a s graphic Novel..I am serious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletethanks a ton... wanted to give it a egyptian flavour... I was doing this like a diligent student...though never did this in school...matching notes of all previous authors..it was so much fun
ReplyDeleteI loved this part a lot! It almost made my heart skip a beat when shastri enters. And boy what a connection! You need to write more fiction (i am very serious!)
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