Saturday, October 12, 2013

Beads of nature










Beads of nature
lining up to bloom and ripe
world green in envy


Written for the Write Tribe Contest: picture haiku -  where we have to interpret the picture taken by the man with the vision - Phenomenon  through a haiku. This is my first attempt on Haiku after a lot of struggle. 

Shiva


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16 comments:

  1. Shilpa GargOctober 12, 2013 at 9:42 PM

    This is lovely first attempt! Liked the green with envy part... very different interpretation! All the best for the contest :)

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  2. norrbuOctober 12, 2013 at 9:52 PM

    and I'm deep in envy too :)

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  3. SuzyOctober 13, 2013 at 12:31 PM

    Sweet haiku - the lining up made me smile.

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  4. Privy TriflesOctober 13, 2013 at 2:46 PM

    Wow... first attempt? Cannot believe that... I have always admired people who can write haikus!! Loved it

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  5. sridevi DattaOctober 13, 2013 at 8:32 PM

    What a wonderful first attempt :)

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  6. SunitaOctober 14, 2013 at 3:46 PM

    An amazing imagery! First Haiku? unbelievable :)

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  7. kalpana solsiOctober 14, 2013 at 3:48 PM

    Never the thought of green envy struck me. lovely.

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  8. kalpana solsiOctober 14, 2013 at 3:48 PM

    Never the thought of green envy struck me. lovely.

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  9. AnonymousOctober 15, 2013 at 12:06 AM

    made me go green,way to go,bravo

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  10. Mina MenonOctober 15, 2013 at 1:14 PM

    This is perfect imagery - like it! Like it!

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  11. anuprabha vOctober 15, 2013 at 1:57 PM

    Inspiring and thoughtful haikus.
    Mine is under chronicles of anu. It is a maiden attempt!!

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    1. ShivaOctober 16, 2013 at 1:29 PM

      yes I read and loved yours... very soft and sweet

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  12. PhenoMenonOctober 15, 2013 at 5:25 PM

    Thanks for the entry Shiva

    PhenoMenon

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  13. UnknownOctober 16, 2013 at 8:22 PM

    Awesome haiku.

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  14. UnknownNovember 20, 2013 at 3:16 PM

    Very nicely written.Very imaginative.

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