Saturday, October 12, 2013

Beads of nature










Beads of nature
lining up to bloom and ripe
world green in envy


Written for the Write Tribe Contest: picture haiku -  where we have to interpret the picture taken by the man with the vision - Phenomenon  through a haiku. This is my first attempt on Haiku after a lot of struggle. 


Shiva


18 comments:

  1. This is lovely first attempt! Liked the green with envy part... very different interpretation! All the best for the contest :)

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  2. Sweet haiku - the lining up made me smile.

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  3. Wow... first attempt? Cannot believe that... I have always admired people who can write haikus!! Loved it

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  4. An amazing imagery! First Haiku? unbelievable :)

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  5. Never the thought of green envy struck me. lovely.

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  6. Never the thought of green envy struck me. lovely.

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  7. made me go green,way to go,bravo

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  8. This is perfect imagery - like it! Like it!

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  9. Inspiring and thoughtful haikus.
    Mine is under chronicles of anu. It is a maiden attempt!!

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    1. yes I read and loved yours... very soft and sweet

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  10. Thanks for the entry Shiva

    PhenoMenon

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  11. Very nicely written.Very imaginative.

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