Thursday, August 1, 2013

Moment of Truth

55 Fiction - My first attempt!!! 


First“Nobody knows him better than me. “
Second “Nobody can love him like me”
Third- “But he loves me the most”
Kush was in a fix…a situation he had dreaded all his life. The Three love of his life fighting for him.

Third –“Papa please tell Ma and Gradma the truthHe could never!


This was written for Write Tribe 55 Fiction. Thanks Vidya for the gyaan.

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    1. Thanks Sridevi... Loved all of urs too

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    1. Thanks corinne..coming from u this carries weight (I dont mean literally :) )

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  3. Very cleverly done. Liked the way it ended.

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    1. Thanks suzy... Actually have always felt for a man this is his biggest and best dilemma of his life.. three ladies in his life and all three think they love him the most :)

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  4. How sweet! Very nicely done 55er!! :)

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  5. <3 really sweet apoorva
    good one

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  6. very aptly described the happy feeling of that lucky man.

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