Thursday, August 1, 2013

Moment of Truth

55 Fiction - My first attempt!!! 


First –“Nobody knows him better than me. “
Second – “Nobody can love him like me”
Third- “But he loves me the most”
Kush was in a fix…a situation he had dreaded all his life. The Three love of his life fighting for him.

Third –“Papa please tell Ma and Gradma the truth” He could never!


This was written for Write Tribe 55 Fiction. Thanks Vidya for the gyaan.
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12 comments:

  1. Sridevi 1974August 1, 2013 at 8:51 PM

    Utterly adorable !

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  2. Corinne RodriguesAugust 1, 2013 at 11:42 PM

    What a happy situation, really! :)

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    1. ShivaAugust 3, 2013 at 10:49 AM

      Thanks corinne..coming from u this carries weight (I dont mean literally :) )

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  3. SuzyAugust 2, 2013 at 3:31 PM

    Very cleverly done. Liked the way it ended.

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    1. ShivaAugust 3, 2013 at 10:48 AM

      Thanks suzy... Actually have always felt for a man this is his biggest and best dilemma of his life.. three ladies in his life and all three think they love him the most :)

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  4. Vidya SuryAugust 3, 2013 at 9:09 AM

    :-) You're smart! You are! :D

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  5. Shilpa GargAugust 3, 2013 at 3:36 PM

    How sweet! Very nicely done 55er!! :)

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  6. Mina MenonAugust 6, 2013 at 2:26 PM

    Like Like Apoorva!

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  7. Afshan ShaikAugust 6, 2013 at 6:02 PM

    <3 really sweet apoorva
    good one

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  8. AnonymousAugust 16, 2013 at 8:08 AM

    very aptly described the happy feeling of that lucky man.

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